RE: Childish & sour...CNF #133.

Stella is very fortunate to have a friend like you. This was a good interpretation of the prompt, @beckroyal and you set the scene well. I could feel the excitement in the room. Curation, however, would have been higher if you had edited your piece. Some guidance: Your piece contains several questions which are followed by periods or exclamation marks instead of question marks. There are also a few other easily avoidable errors such as misspelling the name Sheila as Shiela on one occasion. Remember to proof read your stories before publishing and to edit for spelling, punctuation, and basic grammar errors, and your piece will be elevated.